The Poem
This is an amateur attempt at poetry. And as always, it is my experience which I have shared. This is also an attempt to point out the flaws of having relationships through texts, calls and social networking. So stop living in a virtual world, go out and meet people (after reading this post, that is)
THE DATE
When I asked you out, you didn't reply
Once, twice, thrice, you didn't hear my ply.
Fourth time I asked, you said 'seriously'?
The surprise in your eyes, compelled me to say 'jokingly'.
For friends we were, through texts and calls
Always met with friends, in some malls;
For what you saw, was the fake smile
Our thoughts were apart some miles.
You didn't see the need and the loneliness
A date for you was, mere stupid-ness.
I wanted to share my thoughts, views and care
You told me you couldn't defy your parents, how much you dare.
It Took me three months, but I moved on
Not becoming devdas, I took it as a con.
You still text me, about the rains and the sun.
But I had made my mind, you are not the one.
You call me daily and ask for a reply.
But when I don't, you ask why love why??
"Let's go out", you tempt me with a date
Oh no girl!! It's too late.
I don't blame you, for our failed relationship
Because it's our society, which is in a dip.
Go out with a guy, and you ll be pointed a gun
For thence I may quote, "No talking to strangers, but marrying one".
THE DATE
When I asked you out, you didn't reply
Once, twice, thrice, you didn't hear my ply.
Fourth time I asked, you said 'seriously'?
The surprise in your eyes, compelled me to say 'jokingly'.
For friends we were, through texts and calls
Always met with friends, in some malls;
For what you saw, was the fake smile
Our thoughts were apart some miles.
You didn't see the need and the loneliness
A date for you was, mere stupid-ness.
I wanted to share my thoughts, views and care
You told me you couldn't defy your parents, how much you dare.
It Took me three months, but I moved on
Not becoming devdas, I took it as a con.
You still text me, about the rains and the sun.
But I had made my mind, you are not the one.
You call me daily and ask for a reply.
But when I don't, you ask why love why??
"Let's go out", you tempt me with a date
Oh no girl!! It's too late.
I don't blame you, for our failed relationship
Because it's our society, which is in a dip.
Go out with a guy, and you ll be pointed a gun
For thence I may quote, "No talking to strangers, but marrying one".
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ReplyDeleteHaven't read something that connects so well in a long time! :)
ReplyDeletearey thank you :)))
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ReplyDeletearee....u wrote it??impressd....good wrk...
ReplyDeleteYes..Thank you!!
ReplyDeleteToo good..... :)
ReplyDeletethanks yar!!
ReplyDeletesplendid!! :) *cough* true story *cough*!!! :P :P
ReplyDeletehahaha..m happy that some of us don't fall in this category :p
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